feedback/sorry for my absence recently carnage blog <3

I was not present for when we go the feedback on our work because I had to work on panto, but the girls informed me that we needed to change our trailer slightly to have more of a climax at the end and also we needed to change our music. We also found that we needed to change our film magazine slightly, but we have already started work on this changing the background colour and also the size of the main image as the group said it was too large. I think our main priority at the minute is to find some suitable music for our trailer as it plays a really big part in making the trailer a success.

practical feedback :)

Yesterday we had a class showing of our pratical which gave us a chance to get some feedback, both from the teachers and from the class.
For our trailer we had possitvie feedback, students said that they liked the make up we used, they liked the mise en scene and they also liked the fast paced editing in the second half of the film. One student said that they didn't like one particular shot of a hand as they thought it would look better closer. The teachers also said that they liked our editing and they thought the mise en scene created in the first half of the trailer works really well.
For our poster we had alot of positive feedback, students said that they liked our background as it suited our horror genre and they said that our image is very striking and caught their attention. Teachers said that they liked our tagline as it was catchy; 'clawing it's way to a cinema near you'.
Our magazine cover had mixed reactions as our image is quite big and 'in your face' students thought that with the text it looked too busy and that the text was too spread over the cover, they also said that it would look better on a black background rather then a white one so we have changed it to a black background with white writing, we think that this looks better as the white makes the image stand out and makes the red on her face stand out aswell.

pitch feedback :)

Today we started on our powerpoint to pitch our idea to our class, i also researched some film review magazines. Our powerpoint is designed to give the members of our class a good idea of what our trailer is about and our magazine cover. Over the coming weeks we will adapt our powerpoint and update everyone on our progress.